Star Writer

Star Writer

Congratulations to Cole who is Opal Class’ Star Writer! Have a read of his amazing ‘Coming Home’ piece.

Coming Home by Cole 

Snowy, cold, frozen – I need to get home before she notices I’m not there. The cold weather makes me blind and lost. I will get home, I will. On the outside, I feel cold but on the inside, I feel brave and determined. The snow on the floor is like a thick blanket.

I set off on the long journey to try and get home. If I wouldn’t have come over here, if I never went hunting, if I don’t get home, then I might die. In the cold, the huge mountains are like giant boulders that almost hit me. The snow hits me like rocks on my red breast.

The rain wets me but I’m so tired. I need to rest, need to rest. I dream, dream of home. I wake up. My throat is dry and I need some water. I went to the closest river where I drink some water and ‘oh my’… a HAWK! He tries to eat me as I sip the freezing, clear, cold water. I fly away rapidly. And the blizzard hits me in the face, hits me like a hard slap in the face. In the distance, I see a flock of birds who are persuading me to follow them.

I follow them until I meet the raging sea. I’m being battered; the wind is pushing me from side to side. I spot a boat and try to land on it. The boat is being punished by the sea. Suddenly, a wave knocks me out and all I see next is two big hands and two big feet then black…

Snug, warm, cosy – I wake up in the fisherman’s box. Kindly, the fisherman feeds me raisins. I flap and flutter my delicate wings – I have to be on my way. The more I think about home, the more fast I go. Happily, I see my town. I get butterflies in my stomach. In the distance, I see a mince pie so I fly to it but she’s not there. So I call for her and she comes. She asks me, “What took you so long”? And I said, “This and that”.

 

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* Star Writers Alert *

Congratulations to our two newest Star Writers. They really impressed all the Year Six staff with their recent newspaper article – all about The Three Little Pigs!

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Star Writers

IMG_1834.JPGCongratulations to our two newest Star Writers from Quartz and Opal classes. Their Chinese New Year stories were fantastically written and full of wonderful detail – watch this space as their writing is soon to appear in our ‘Writing Corner’.

 

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Quartz Class Star Writer

Keep a look out on our blog for this Star Writer’s excellent descriptive piece on ‘The Piano’…

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Opal Class Star Writer

Keep a look out on our blog for this Star Writer’s excellent descriptive piece on ‘The Piano’…

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Star Writer

Year Six have just chosen a new Star Writer for their ‘Coming Home’ creative writing piece – keep a look out for her writing to appear on the blog VERY SOON!

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Star Writer

We have a brand new Star Writer in Year Six this week…

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Quartz Class Star Writer

This week’s Star Writer in Quartz Class is…

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She has worked very hard on improving her writing and has produced a very mysterious piece of work!

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Opal Class Star Writer

This week’s Star Writer for Opal Class is….

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Miss Hall was massively impressed with the quality of this Star Writer’s mystery writing!

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